Whitney, more music! Yay! I'm glad you are so inspired by it. Just a few suggestions: speak a little louder, keep eye contact with the audience, and maybe put a little inflection on different sentences to keep our attention.
Whitney- You seemed very comfortable up there, and it really helped your presentation. I listen to music all the time, and I agree with everything you talked about. I loved the little clips you played that support your points. Great job!
I think it was good that you actually played music in your speech because it kind of gave us an interactive example of the topic you are trying to get across. All of the quotes from famous musicians were good because it showed if these really important people are taking this really seriously then we should also. I think it is cool that so many people care so deeply about music.
Whitney, That music made me feel really relaxed. And I also love that Dont Stop Believeing song. You did a really good job! I enjoyed your presentation.
Whit, you need to work on your speaking voice. I really like your take on music, even though you quit band, but thats behind us. Overall, you did a very great job.
More music!! I love music so much and it is great that so many poeple stressed the power of music. Maybe just practice a little more. You seemed kind of afraid and by practicing you could have gained that stage prescence that comes with confidence.
Music is a universal bond, I think you said that near the beginning. I could greatly relate to your topic and I enjoyed your presentation. I liked that you related music to our emotions and had different examples of music through out your presentation. You seemed a little nervous, but you got into the groove by the end. Great job, Whitney!
Whitney- I like how you included music in your presentation. It helped add a lot more to your points!I also liked the examples you used like how soldiers use music to help them prepare for battle, or how we use music to help push through a workout. I can totally relate to what you were saying because I love music too. Great job!
Cute skirt! Your pictures were very relavant and cool! Those quotes were perfect for your talk too! Good use of examples of music genres. It was much easier to relate with the examples you played.
Music can help people relax when they need to relieve stress. It can help people be distracted when they are performing and can pump them up. Music can help increase the anger factor which can help people perform better in tight situations, such as sports or soldiers in a war. Music can create feelings of sadness that sometimes fits the scenario people are placed in, such as funerals.
I liked how you identified certain types of music that are played in specific places, like in hospitals or dentist's offices. The way you categorized music by emotion was also really fascinating; it's much more accurate than genres!
Music again?! Haha I'm just kidding. You explained the topic very well and in a different way. I enjoyed your photos and you really flowed up there. I also loved your clips of music to involve the audience. One thing to work on is speaking a little louder and engage the audience with your eyes. Overall very nice!
You were a little quiet and I couldn't really heat you but I like how you incorporated your family in your story.I loved how you gave examples of what music can help with what.
Whitney- It's good too see that you find yourself so inspired by music, and I like how you involved all genres of music into your presentation. This technique made it relatable to almost anybody. You had a clear speaking voice and you did an overall good job.
Whitney- I liked how you had examples of the types of music that can create emotions. You seemed very confidant about your topic and that made your presentation good. Nice job!
Its amazing that your family has bonded over music and using it in your talk was a wonderful idea. It's a very good point that music changes how people feel! Good job!:)
I thought it was a great idea to open up your talk by talking about your family. Playing music was also a really wonderful idea. I think that the quotes that you used worked perfectly with what you were saying.
I like how everyone who did Music talked about something different and had completely different styles.
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I like all the different songs you chose to use since they were all very different in tone and style. Your presentaion was very comfortable and well practice. Good Job!
Whitney- You did such a good job on your presentation. You could tell that it was something that mattered to you. I especially liked how you had music examples that played. You delivered your speech well and it looked rehearsed. Really good job!
MUSIC IS SO IMPORTANT. Even though a few students talked about music, you brought up new points. I loved your music clips interwined with your presentation. Nice work :)
Whitney, more music! Yay! I'm glad you are so inspired by it. Just a few suggestions: speak a little louder, keep eye contact with the audience, and maybe put a little inflection on different sentences to keep our attention.
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ReplyDeleteYou seemed very comfortable up there, and it really helped your presentation. I listen to music all the time, and I agree with everything you talked about. I loved the little clips you played that support your points. Great job!
I think it was good that you actually played music in your speech because it kind of gave us an interactive example of the topic you are trying to get across. All of the quotes from famous musicians were good because it showed if these really important people are taking this really seriously then we should also. I think it is cool that so many people care so deeply about music.
ReplyDeleteWhitney I really liked your TED Talk especially the way you presented with the reasons why music matters. Oh that and great topic choice! Good job!
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ReplyDeleteThat music made me feel really relaxed. And I also love that Dont Stop Believeing song. You did a really good job! I enjoyed your presentation.
Whit, you need to work on your speaking voice. I really like your take on music, even though you quit band, but thats behind us. Overall, you did a very great job.
ReplyDeleteMore music!! I love music so much and it is great that so many poeple stressed the power of music. Maybe just practice a little more. You seemed kind of afraid and by practicing you could have gained that stage prescence that comes with confidence.
ReplyDeleteMusic is a universal bond, I think you said that near the beginning. I could greatly relate to your topic and I enjoyed your presentation. I liked that you related music to our emotions and had different examples of music through out your presentation. You seemed a little nervous, but you got into the groove by the end. Great job, Whitney!
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ReplyDeleteI like how you included music in your presentation. It helped add a lot more to your points!I also liked the examples you used like how soldiers use music to help them prepare for battle, or how we use music to help push through a workout. I can totally relate to what you were saying because I love music too. Great job!
Your presentaion was really strong and had some powerful quotes. I loved the music clips that you added into the presentation! Great job Whitney!
ReplyDeleteCute skirt! Your pictures were very relavant and cool! Those quotes were perfect for your talk too! Good use of examples of music genres. It was much easier to relate with the examples you played.
ReplyDeleteMusic can help people relax when they need to relieve stress. It can help people be distracted when they are performing and can pump them up. Music can help increase the anger factor which can help people perform better in tight situations, such as sports or soldiers in a war. Music can create feelings of sadness that sometimes fits the scenario people are placed in, such as funerals.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you identified certain types of music that are played in specific places, like in hospitals or dentist's offices. The way you categorized music by emotion was also really fascinating; it's much more accurate than genres!
ReplyDeleteMusic again?! Haha I'm just kidding. You explained the topic very well and in a different way. I enjoyed your photos and you really flowed up there. I also loved your clips of music to involve the audience. One thing to work on is speaking a little louder and engage the audience with your eyes. Overall very nice!
ReplyDeleteYou were a little quiet and I couldn't really heat you but I like how you incorporated your family in your story.I loved how you gave examples of what music can help with what.
ReplyDeleteWhitney-
ReplyDeleteIt's good too see that you find yourself so inspired by music, and I like how you involved all genres of music into your presentation. This technique made it relatable to almost anybody. You had a clear speaking voice and you did an overall good job.
Whitney-
ReplyDeleteI liked how you had examples of the types of music that can create emotions. You seemed very confidant about your topic and that made your presentation good. Nice job!
Really good talk! It was very interesting to listen to! I loved the music between the slides! You did a great job!
ReplyDeleteIts amazing that your family has bonded over music and using it in your talk was a wonderful idea. It's a very good point that music changes how people feel! Good job!:)
ReplyDeleteI thought it was a great idea to open up your talk by talking about your family. Playing music was also a really wonderful idea. I think that the quotes that you used worked perfectly with what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteWhitney-
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was well rehearsed, with good examples and pictures, and you looked very comfortable up on stage.
Great job!
I like how everyone who did Music talked about something different and had completely different styles.
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I like all the different songs you chose to use since they were all very different in tone and style. Your presentaion was very comfortable and well practice. Good Job!
Whitney- You did such a good job on your presentation. You could tell that it was something that mattered to you. I especially liked how you had music examples that played. You delivered your speech well and it looked rehearsed. Really good job!
ReplyDeleteMUSIC IS SO IMPORTANT. Even though a few students talked about music, you brought up new points. I loved your music clips interwined with your presentation. Nice work :)
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