James- You used a lot of great humor, allowed us to connect to our own lives, used great examples, made us think, and connected everything together perfectly! Great job!
I liked your use of humor to get your point across. I also liked your message, and how you were confident in giving it.
I would recommend not moving back and forth, from one foot to the other. You stood in one spot and did this the entire time. Just move around a little more.
James- I thought the poem format of your TED Talk and the poems that you made was absolutely awesome. Your Talk was absolutly hilarious. I think your examples of justin bieber was very cool. The poem idea is great.
James- The way you started you Talk was really creative and it worked well. It also seemed that your TED Talk was in the form of a poem. Your word choice was awesome. Fantastic job!
Amazing job! Your presentation really brought attention to something I've never thought of before. I think the slide-show was very well done and I think the funny remarks really helped to keep audience interested and make your point stronger. You really seemed to know your topic well and took a lot of time to memorize your speech really well.
James- I loved your intro. It was very cute! I loved how you were able to relate to the audience, through your examples of facebook or "what we think".J-Biebs! great example! your humor allowed the crowd to smile and pay attention to your speech. Awesome job!
James' topic was really interesting, and I wouldn't have thought of it. He used some really good example to back up his subject. I thouroughly enjoyed James' TED talk.
James, Your presentation was AWESOME! It was very funny and I never expected anyone to take on a topic like poetry. I also really liked your examples! Your really conected with your audience! Fantastic job!
I loved the way you started the talk! It was really interesting and got my attention. I loved your points and how they flowed together. I think that your topic was interesting and you took a simple topic and made it connect to everyone. Great job!
James- I really liked your example with Ian in it, it was good! Your stories were funny, which made me want to hear more! Good job! Your other examples were very strong, and held the audience's attention.
James- Your subject was very interesting. Very clever the way you connected Justin Bieber to world connections. Great topic, and you delivered it better than most everyone. Amazing job.
James - Your speech was witty and genuine, and full of new and interesting ideas. You obviously presented a topic that is very interesting to you. This personal tie enhanced your speech greatly. You also came out with a smooth and flawless flow. Great job.
James, good job with the story in the beginning. Your connections to Justin Beiber made it funny and showed that poems really are everywhere. Your made up poem was very short and to the point which was good. Your message was clear too. Good job James.
Your slides were really cool! I love how your speech was a poem, it really enhanced your speech! I never thought of using poems as an insight into people, but I realized as you spoke how much reading my cousin's poems has helped me understand him. I am not a fan of Bieber, but I still liked the example you gave of him connecting the world!
James- I loved your talk. I loved how you added humor to your ted talk. It really kept us listening to your talk. I loved your topic it was very fun to listen to. Good job!!
I love the humor in here. I also love the message. It really challenges the way we think, in a good way. (By the way, I figured out how to make any tweet: "OMG, *Insert Anything here, really anything*, LOL"). Unity is something humankind has tried for since the beginning of time, yet are unable to achieve.
James- it was really cool how you rhymed throughout your talk, considering you were talking about poetry. You had great examples, and your humor made it very interesting to watch.
James: I like how you opened up with humor! Everyone instantly wanted to listen to you! Your take an poetry was awesome, I never thought of it as something that could connect the world! Overall, it was an awesome talk! :)
James's TED Talk was very interesting. He did a very good job presenting and looked very comfortable. His topic was very original and he brought in some new ideas. Good TED Talk, James.
That was really good! I liked how you rhymed parts of your speech and used the examples of Ian and Beleibers. Your topic was about something new and original which made it very entertaining to watch. Good job!
Your speech was really engaging. Your Belieber reference was really true. The subject of the power of poetry was a relatable topic with everybody. Great presentation!
James- That was a pretty sweet talk. I loved the humor part that you brought into it. Also very kind of disappointed that I did not get to learn about Ian's love life. Anyway, great job bud.
James- that was an awsome perasontation. Ypu seemed so confident and I hope that you feel that way too! I love how you connected poetry to a modern day sensation. Really great job!!!!! Sage
I really liked James' TED talk. I liked how everyone was able to relate to what he was talking about and we knew what he meant. He did a great job. The way that he spoke was really laid back, which was good, and I think that he was successful.
I loved how James started off with relating poems to something everyone can relate to: relationships. He did a great job in making everyone laugh, but also helping them to see his point that poetry can connect the world. James did an awesome job with connecting with the crowd, and I enjoyed listening to his talk.
James- You used a lot of great humor, allowed us to connect to our own lives, used great examples, made us think, and connected everything together perfectly! Great job!
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ReplyDeleteI liked your use of humor to get your point across. I also liked your message, and how you were confident in giving it.
I would recommend not moving back and forth, from one foot to the other. You stood in one spot and did this the entire time. Just move around a little more.
Great talk! One of the best I have seen so far.
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James- I thought the poem format of your TED Talk and the poems that you made was absolutely awesome. Your Talk was absolutly hilarious. I think your examples of justin bieber was very cool. The poem idea is great.
ReplyDeleteJames- The way you started you Talk was really creative and it worked well. It also seemed that your TED Talk was in the form of a poem. Your word choice was awesome. Fantastic job!
ReplyDeleteAmazing job! Your presentation really brought attention to something I've never thought of before. I think the slide-show was very well done and I think the funny remarks really helped to keep audience interested and make your point stronger. You really seemed to know your topic well and took a lot of time to memorize your speech really well.
ReplyDeleteJames, I love your slides and your humor. It was funny, but it still got to the point. However, I wanted to learn more about Ian's love life. :)
ReplyDeleteJames- I loved your intro. It was very cute! I loved how you were able to relate to the audience, through your examples of facebook or "what we think".J-Biebs! great example! your humor allowed the crowd to smile and pay attention to your speech. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteJames' topic was really interesting, and I wouldn't have thought of it. He used some really good example to back up his subject. I thouroughly enjoyed James' TED talk.
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ReplyDeleteYour presentation was AWESOME! It was very funny and I never expected anyone to take on a topic like poetry. I also really liked your examples! Your really conected with your audience! Fantastic job!
I loved the way you started the talk! It was really interesting and got my attention. I loved your points and how they flowed together. I think that your topic was interesting and you took a simple topic and made it connect to everyone. Great job!
ReplyDeleteJames- I really liked your example with Ian in it, it was good! Your stories were funny, which made me want to hear more! Good job! Your other examples were very strong, and held the audience's attention.
ReplyDeleteJames- Your subject was very interesting. Very clever the way you connected Justin Bieber to world connections. Great topic, and you delivered it better than most everyone. Amazing job.
ReplyDeleteJames - Your speech was witty and genuine, and full of new and interesting ideas. You obviously presented a topic that is very interesting to you. This personal tie enhanced your speech greatly. You also came out with a smooth and flawless flow. Great job.
ReplyDeleteJames, good job with the story in the beginning. Your connections to Justin Beiber made it funny and showed that poems really are everywhere. Your made up poem was very short and to the point which was good. Your message was clear too. Good job James.
ReplyDeleteYour slides were really cool! I love how your speech was a poem, it really enhanced your speech! I never thought of using poems as an insight into people, but I realized as you spoke how much reading my cousin's poems has helped me understand him. I am not a fan of Bieber, but I still liked the example you gave of him connecting the world!
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ReplyDeleteI loved your talk. I loved how you added humor to your ted talk. It really kept us listening to your talk. I loved your topic it was very fun to listen to. Good job!!
I love the humor in here. I also love the message. It really challenges the way we think, in a good way. (By the way, I figured out how to make any tweet: "OMG, *Insert Anything here, really anything*, LOL"). Unity is something humankind has tried for since the beginning of time, yet are unable to achieve.
ReplyDeleteJames- it was really cool how you rhymed throughout your talk, considering you were talking about poetry. You had great examples, and your humor made it very interesting to watch.
ReplyDeleteJames: I like how you opened up with humor! Everyone instantly wanted to listen to you! Your take an poetry was awesome, I never thought of it as something that could connect the world! Overall, it was an awesome talk! :)
ReplyDeleteJames's TED Talk was very interesting. He did a very good job presenting and looked very comfortable. His topic was very original and he brought in some new ideas. Good TED Talk, James.
ReplyDeleteThat was really good! I liked how you rhymed parts of your speech and used the examples of Ian and Beleibers. Your topic was about something new and original which made it very entertaining to watch.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Your speech was really engaging. Your Belieber reference was really true. The subject of the power of poetry was a relatable topic with everybody. Great presentation!
ReplyDeleteJames, I really enjoyed your talk! It was great! I loved the humor and creativity you used. I absolutely connect with your talk! Great job!
ReplyDeleteJames- That was a pretty sweet talk. I loved the humor part that you brought into it. Also very kind of disappointed that I did not get to learn about Ian's love life. Anyway, great job bud.
ReplyDeleteJames- that was an awsome perasontation. Ypu seemed so confident and I hope that you feel that way too! I love how you connected poetry to a modern day sensation. Really great job!!!!!
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I liked how James used humor to get his point across. it made me laugh. I also liked how he talked about justin beiber.
ReplyDeleteI really liked James' TED talk. I liked how everyone was able to relate to what he was talking about and we knew what he meant. He did a great job. The way that he spoke was really laid back, which was good, and I think that he was successful.
ReplyDeleteI loved how James started off with relating poems to something everyone can relate to: relationships. He did a great job in making everyone laugh, but also helping them to see his point that poetry can connect the world. James did an awesome job with connecting with the crowd, and I enjoyed listening to his talk.
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