Maria- Your presentation was so relatable, because in school we all just focus on our grades. I completly agree with everything you said in your talk, we all need to move on and forget about our mistakes. Great job!
Maria- I loved your topic. I could really relate it to my self and you seemed so confident! You definitely made me feel better about mistakes I have made. I could tell you could relate to the audience and it was wonderful! Great job. (:
Maria, make more mistakes. This is a powerful message and I can live by that. We are all human and we all make mistakes. You stumbled along the way but you did a great gob(mistake of purpose).
Maria- You did a really good job. Your topic was so relatable. I like all of the quotes and examples you had. You seemed nervous, but you powered through it. Nice job!
Maria! I can totally relate to what you were saying and definetly learned from your presentation! You did a great job presenting and I like how you told us you made mistakes at the beginning, it really made your presentation relatable. Also, I like how you related the end of your speech to the beginning! Great job!
Great pictures darling. I love your topic, very thought provoking. Great examples with Albert Einstein and Dewitt Jones. You became so much more comfortable up there once you got going. Great job. Your message is very relateable.
Your presentation had a lot of truth in it and I enjoyed it. I completely understand your stage fright and I'm absolutely horrified for when I go...:) I love how you ended it! great job!
Maria, Wow I know that you were talking about being wrong, but you are so right! Grades and Parents scolding are the biggest stresses in my life. You did an awesome job don't have stage fright! I enjoyed your topic it is so true to this topic.
Your talk was really good! Although you lost your place in some parts of your speech, you still pulled through. I loved your topic! It was an inspirational talk!
I was impressed when you brought your insecurities to the light and then talked about how they were totally overblown. Perspective is a huge concept-- if the whole world could adjust their perspectives away from hatred and evil, we could all walk in each other's shoes. Perspective is the gateway to empathy, methinks!!
Maria I liked your TED Talk and the good examples used. I liked how you used the example of students in modern day society afraid of making mistakes out of fear of judgement. Good job!
I liked your example of the kid drawing on the wall because we have all been there as a kid. I know that I am probably more nervous than I would normally be for this TED talk because I am afraid to make mistakes. I feel as though I should really be not as nervous and just spit out the speech knowing I will do well. I liked how you wrapped it up with something simple also so it is not that confusing.
You had a great message in your presentation that was really easy to relate to! I liked how you were very honest with the audience about how you felt. Great job!
I really enjoyed this presentation and how relatable it was to everyone. I completley agree with everything that you said. You were a great presenter and I loved your final message.
Mistakes are a part of life, and there's no way around that. People need to take these mistakes as learning experiences and look at them in a whole new light. Excellent topic.
Maria used her experience during the TED assignment to help write her speech. It was a powerful speech that got her point across. She was obviously a little flustered at the board, but she did say she had a fear of the stage so I can udersand. Her conclusion wrapped up her ideas and moved them to a place where we could keep them close and learn from it.
I loved your topic. It was so refreashing to see you overcome your mistakes just like you talk about. You made excellent points and looked very professional. Wonderful Job!
I loved your influction and tone. A few mess-ups but you seemed to recovered well and quickly. Your message was very clear and I could relate to it easily. I know I am afraid to make mistakes and this was very nice and refreshing for someone to tell us that it is okay to have create faults.
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ReplyDeleteYour presentation was so relatable, because in school we all just focus on our grades. I completly agree with everything you said in your talk, we all need to move on and forget about our mistakes. Great job!
I liked how your TED was about the TED. It was perfect because everyone in here has gone through it!! I was impressed with the memorization too!
ReplyDeletePS- My Splonters are recovering quickly!! -spasmmm
Maria- I loved your topic. I could really relate it to my self and you seemed so confident! You definitely made me feel better about mistakes I have made. I could tell you could relate to the audience and it was wonderful! Great job. (:
ReplyDeleteMaria, make more mistakes. This is a powerful message and I can live by that. We are all human and we all make mistakes. You stumbled along the way but you did a great gob(mistake of purpose).
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ReplyDeleteYou looked a little bit nervous up there, but you got more comfortable as the presentation went on. But you did pretty well overall.
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ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job. Your topic was so relatable. I like all of the quotes and examples you had. You seemed nervous, but you powered through it. Nice job!
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ReplyDeleteI can totally relate to what you were saying and definetly learned from your presentation! You did a great job presenting and I like how you told us you made mistakes at the beginning, it really made your presentation relatable. Also, I like how you related the end of your speech to the beginning! Great job!
Great pictures darling. I love your topic, very thought provoking. Great examples with Albert Einstein and Dewitt Jones. You became so much more comfortable up there once you got going. Great job. Your message is very relateable.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation had a lot of truth in it and I enjoyed it. I completely understand your stage fright and I'm absolutely horrified for when I go...:) I love how you ended it! great job!
ReplyDeleteMaria,
ReplyDeleteWow I know that you were talking about being wrong, but you are so right! Grades and Parents scolding are the biggest stresses in my life. You did an awesome job don't have stage fright! I enjoyed your topic it is so true to this topic.
Your talk was really good! Although you lost your place in some parts of your speech, you still pulled through. I loved your topic! It was an inspirational talk!
ReplyDeleteI was impressed when you brought your insecurities to the light and then talked about how they were totally overblown. Perspective is a huge concept-- if the whole world could adjust their perspectives away from hatred and evil, we could all walk in each other's shoes. Perspective is the gateway to empathy, methinks!!
ReplyDeleteMaria I liked your TED Talk and the good examples used. I liked how you used the example of students in modern day society afraid of making mistakes out of fear of judgement. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked your example of the kid drawing on the wall because we have all been there as a kid. I know that I am probably more nervous than I would normally be for this TED talk because I am afraid to make mistakes. I feel as though I should really be not as nervous and just spit out the speech knowing I will do well. I liked how you wrapped it up with something simple also so it is not that confusing.
ReplyDeleteYou had a great message in your presentation that was really easy to relate to! I liked how you were very honest with the audience about how you felt. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYour presentation had very good ideas, and i liked the quotes that you had. You had an overall good presentation.
ReplyDeleteThis was a very relate able topic and something that all high school students go through especially now in finals. I learned something great form it!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this presentation and how relatable it was to everyone. I completley agree with everything that you said. You were a great presenter and I loved your final message.
ReplyDeleteMistakes are a part of life, and there's no way around that. People need to take these mistakes as learning experiences and look at them in a whole new light. Excellent topic.
ReplyDeleteMaria used her experience during the TED assignment to help write her speech. It was a powerful speech that got her point across. She was obviously a little flustered at the board, but she did say she had a fear of the stage so I can udersand. Her conclusion wrapped up her ideas and moved them to a place where we could keep them close and learn from it.
ReplyDeleteI loved your topic. It was so refreashing to see you overcome your mistakes just like you talk about. You made excellent points and looked very professional. Wonderful Job!
ReplyDeleteI loved your influction and tone. A few mess-ups but you seemed to recovered well and quickly. Your message was very clear and I could relate to it easily. I know I am afraid to make mistakes and this was very nice and refreshing for someone to tell us that it is okay to have create faults.
ReplyDeleteMaria, I liked your tone and inflections. Just make sure you don't start laughing when you are trying to say something serious.
ReplyDeleteMaria I know what you mean by stagefright. You had a very good tone and an effective style. I like your first slide. Good job!
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