Jenna, it's great that you changed your outlook on life. I wish more people could do that. I hope you weren't stressed about this assignment because it was really good! Just a couple suggestions: try not to say umm to much or have unnecessary pauses. Otherwise, great!
Jenna- Your topic was very relatable to everyone in high school, because it is such a stressfull time. I think we forget to see the fun in life, because we are so worried about the bad stuff. You did a great job!
I like how you started out with a personal story. I am glad you chose to have a new outlook. It is so true when we have a positive attitude, we will be happier. Your pictures were cute.
Jenna- I liked your topic. It was a topic that everyone can relate to. I also liked how you included a personal story in your presentation. I like how you said you have to forgive yourself and other people. Good job!
I like how you let your message be personal. I realized that it is important to be human and be confident in yourself. We can't pent up our emotions and deny who we are. Your message was really great and speaks volumes about what teenagers should aspire to do. You did a great job!
Jenna- It is really cool that you changed your perspective. That is a really hard thing to do and it is really cool that you could tell us your own story. Nicely done (:
I like the beginning of the presentaion. I hope your migraine has gotten better. You were well prepared, but your stress got to you a little bit. Good quotes, they really added to your presentation. Good job!
Jenna- The ideas and thoughts in your talk were very inspiring and informative. i believe in what you are saying, and I believe that if everyone was to counter their mistakes and look on the brighter side then the world would be a better place. You could work a little more on your habit of nervousness, but above all you had a good presentation and had good ideas.
Jenna- I liked how you related being happy to letting go. It is very important that we do not always worry about the small things, and try to move on. Your pictures were interesting/good, but I wish you would have elaborated on them more. Overall, good job!
Jenna- I agree we need to let our emotions out and not care what everyone thinks. I am so much happier now because I don't care what anyone else thinks. I won't let people define what "cool" is or "popular" is for me. I love the examples you used and pictures too. They were super cute and everyone has seen those movies, so they could relate! Great job, very inspiring!
I liked the images and visuals that you showed and the quotes that you used. The personal stories that you used really validated your points. I think that you had a really great message, good job!
Jenna, I could tell that you really learned a lot from this project. I liked your topic it was so true to life. Your speech made me happy because you talked about enjoying life and thats something that people don't do a lot. Good Speech!
I was really glad you picked this topic because you are just a naturally bubbly person! I liked your message that you can overcome anything that gets you down, and to always have a positive attitude.
I like your personal story and how it affected you and influenced your talk. I agree as high school teens we need to learn how to not be so stressed out and live life to the fullest.
Finding happiness in life is something that society looks for but doesn't find because they don't look in the right places. Happiness and experiencing life is something that can only be found when you do something you really enjoy, not something that you bought. GREAT topic.
I liked how you came right off the bat with a personal story because it really showed how much you cared about the topic. I liked how you incorporated all of the fun pictures into your TED talk because it really lightened the mood of the audience as well.
Jenna- I really enjoyed listening to your talk. I loved all the quotes in your slideshow! Your talk related to me and probably most people listening to it! It was really inspirational.
Jenna I really liked your TED Talk especially the way you had examples of yourself in there. I could tell it was well rehearsed and you actually believed in your topic. Great job!
Jenna, it's great that you changed your outlook on life. I wish more people could do that. I hope you weren't stressed about this assignment because it was really good! Just a couple suggestions: try not to say umm to much or have unnecessary pauses. Otherwise, great!
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ReplyDeleteYour topic was very relatable to everyone in high school, because it is such a stressfull time. I think we forget to see the fun in life, because we are so worried about the bad stuff. You did a great job!
I like how you started out with a personal story. I am glad you chose to have a new outlook. It is so true when we have a positive attitude, we will be happier. Your pictures were cute.
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ReplyDeleteI liked your topic. It was a topic that everyone can relate to. I also liked how you included a personal story in your presentation. I like how you said you have to forgive yourself and other people. Good job!
I like how you let your message be personal. I realized that it is important to be human and be confident in yourself. We can't pent up our emotions and deny who we are. Your message was really great and speaks volumes about what teenagers should aspire to do. You did a great job!
ReplyDeleteJenna- It is really cool that you changed your perspective. That is a really hard thing to do and it is really cool that you could tell us your own story. Nicely done (:
ReplyDeleteI like the beginning of the presentaion. I hope your migraine has gotten better. You were well prepared, but your stress got to you a little bit. Good quotes, they really added to your presentation. Good job!
ReplyDeleteJenna-
ReplyDeleteThe ideas and thoughts in your talk were very inspiring and informative. i believe in what you are saying, and I believe that if everyone was to counter their mistakes and look on the brighter side then the world would be a better place. You could work a little more on your habit of nervousness, but above all you had a good presentation and had good ideas.
Jenna- I liked how you related being happy to letting go. It is very important that we do not always worry about the small things, and try to move on. Your pictures were interesting/good, but I wish you would have elaborated on them more. Overall, good job!
ReplyDeleteJenna-
ReplyDeleteI agree we need to let our emotions out and not care what everyone thinks. I am so much happier now because I don't care what anyone else thinks. I won't let people define what "cool" is or "popular" is for me. I love the examples you used and pictures too. They were super cute and everyone has seen those movies, so they could relate! Great job, very inspiring!
I liked the images and visuals that you showed and the quotes that you used. The personal stories that you used really validated your points. I think that you had a really great message, good job!
ReplyDeleteJenna,
ReplyDeleteI could tell that you really learned a lot from this project. I liked your topic it was so true to life. Your speech made me happy because you talked about enjoying life and thats something that people don't do a lot. Good Speech!
I was really glad you picked this topic because you are just a naturally bubbly person! I liked your message that you can overcome anything that gets you down, and to always have a positive attitude.
ReplyDeleteI like your personal story and how it affected you and influenced your talk. I agree as high school teens we need to learn how to not be so stressed out and live life to the fullest.
ReplyDeleteFinding happiness in life is something that society looks for but doesn't find because they don't look in the right places. Happiness and experiencing life is something that can only be found when you do something you really enjoy, not something that you bought. GREAT topic.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you came right off the bat with a personal story because it really showed how much you cared about the topic. I liked how you incorporated all of the fun pictures into your TED talk because it really lightened the mood of the audience as well.
ReplyDeleteJenna- I really enjoyed listening to your talk. I loved all the quotes in your slideshow! Your talk related to me and probably most people listening to it! It was really inspirational.
ReplyDeleteJenna I really liked your TED Talk especially the way you had examples of yourself in there. I could tell it was well rehearsed and you actually believed in your topic. Great job!
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