Anna, I really like your connection to Alice. ITS THE WRONG ALICE!! I think that your speaking voice is full of confidence. I think your message of identity is very powerful.
Anna, great speech. You spoke at the perfect pace. Maybe one thing you could have done better was speak just a tiny bit louder or change your inflection more so as to keep the audience intrigued.
Anna started ou with a story we could all relate to. She began talking about how Alice in Wonderland found her identity and that put her on the right path to defeat the jaberwocky. She then told her own story and taught us how to find our own identity.
People finding their story is something that has been completely lost in today's society. People need to get back to their roots and become who they were supposed to be; who they were destined to be. This is a great topic for high school students who are looking for a purpose and a way to go in their lives.
Anna- Your presentation was really good! I loved all your stories, they all supported your talk so well. You seemed so comfortable and that really helped the presentation. I loved the song at the end too! Great job!
Anna! You seemed so comfortable up there! You were very relaxed and I understood where you were coming from. Your topic was very relate able! Overall, great TED!
Anna! Wow! You did an amzing job and seemed so comfortable standing up there. I loved your examples and the music at the end. I could totally relate to it and it was a very good topic. I think we do need to understand ourselves before we can reall be ourselves. The Alic in Wonderland example was great to relate to this. Great job!
I love how you started off by stating your purpose. It made it easy to follow your talk! I also enjoyed how you related it to a good story, which, as Daniel Pink shows in AWNM, is a major part of being creative and successful in the future.
Anna- You did a really good job!Your presentation topic was interesting and I think that everybody could relate to what you were saying. I like how you used personal stories and stories that people could relate to. Nice job!
I really enjoyed how you had many stories and related it to Alice Wonderland. This was a really great presentation and I loved how you brought it out to the big picture and allowed us to relate to you.
Your movie example was really good since you brought a seemingly unrelated story to your topic and tied it in really well. Your ending with a song was good because it was a good change of pace. I felt as though your tie in to your sports team was really good also because many people can relate to that.
Anna, you were so relaxed and comfortable up there, and you knew what you were saying. I especially liked how the ending and how you included the song. Great job!
Anna- Your message was great, and your presentation was well rehearsed, and well timed. However, it was a little bit short, and you didn't move around the stage. Overall though, good job!
Anna- You were so confident while you spoke it really helped to inspire the audience! I envy your confidence and your topic was very intriguing! Great job! (:
I loved how you explained your points with examples and stories. It was so inspiring to hear that our identity can sometimes be outside of ourselves and we can grow into it. Your voice, tone, and pace was perfect. Great Job!
Anna, I really like your connection to Alice. ITS THE WRONG ALICE!! I think that your speaking voice is full of confidence. I think your message of identity is very powerful.
ReplyDeleteAnna, great speech. You spoke at the perfect pace. Maybe one thing you could have done better was speak just a tiny bit louder or change your inflection more so as to keep the audience intrigued.
ReplyDeleteAnna started ou with a story we could all relate to. She began talking about how Alice in Wonderland found her identity and that put her on the right path to defeat the jaberwocky. She then told her own story and taught us how to find our own identity.
ReplyDeletePeople finding their story is something that has been completely lost in today's society. People need to get back to their roots and become who they were supposed to be; who they were destined to be. This is a great topic for high school students who are looking for a purpose and a way to go in their lives.
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ReplyDeleteYour presentation was really good! I loved all your stories, they all supported your talk so well. You seemed so comfortable and that really helped the presentation. I loved the song at the end too! Great job!
Anna! You seemed so comfortable up there! You were very relaxed and I understood where you were coming from. Your topic was very relate able! Overall, great TED!
ReplyDeleteYou seemed very calm and relaxed, your speech was obviously well rehearsed. You also recovered very well from your clicker mishap.
ReplyDeleteAnna! Your presentation was great, you were so organized and it was great to see your talk memorized so well!
ReplyDeleteYou have a great message. Finding oneself is a great goal. Good job at presenting this!
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was very well put together. You had some great stories that painted some good imagery and had a really inspiring message. Great job!
ReplyDeleteAnna!
ReplyDeleteWow! You did an amzing job and seemed so comfortable standing up there. I loved your examples and the music at the end. I could totally relate to it and it was a very good topic. I think we do need to understand ourselves before we can reall be ourselves. The Alic in Wonderland example was great to relate to this. Great job!
I love how you started off by stating your purpose. It made it easy to follow your talk! I also enjoyed how you related it to a good story, which, as Daniel Pink shows in AWNM, is a major part of being creative and successful in the future.
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ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job!Your presentation topic was interesting and I think that everybody could relate to what you were saying. I like how you used personal stories and stories that people could relate to. Nice job!
I really enjoyed how you had many stories and related it to Alice Wonderland. This was a really great presentation and I loved how you brought it out to the big picture and allowed us to relate to you.
ReplyDeleteI loved your talk and how comfortable you felt. Great job!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your preparedness and your slide show, it was really informative and inspiring. You were also very calm and ready, good job.
ReplyDeleteYour movie example was really good since you brought a seemingly unrelated story to your topic and tied it in really well. Your ending with a song was good because it was a good change of pace. I felt as though your tie in to your sports team was really good also because many people can relate to that.
ReplyDeleteAnna, you were so relaxed and comfortable up there, and you knew what you were saying. I especially liked how the ending and how you included the song. Great job!
ReplyDeleteAnna-
ReplyDeleteYour message was great, and your presentation was well rehearsed, and well timed. However, it was a little bit short, and you didn't move around the stage.
Overall though, good job!
I like your examples and the music at the end. No one had done that yet. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteAnna- You were so confident while you spoke it really helped to inspire the audience! I envy your confidence and your topic was very intriguing! Great job! (:
ReplyDeleteYou were so right when you said the journey is what counts! Your presentation was great! Good Job Anna! You just dragged some words out, but good job!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you explained your points with examples and stories. It was so inspiring to hear that our identity can sometimes be outside of ourselves and we can grow into it. Your voice, tone, and pace was perfect. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteAnna I liked your TED Talk and all of the good examples. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked your topic because it was very interesting to listen to and easy to understand.
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