Your topic was really original and I liked that you talked about many different people, like family, friends, teachers, security guards, and that they are all just normal people, doing extraordinary things. You were very comfortable talking, and it was very easy to understand.
Grace- I loved the way you presented your talk. You seemed confident and I loved the humor you put in. I wanted to watch every minute. You topic was also very fun and it was a great idea. It made it easier to watch because you seemed so comfortable. Great job!
Grace, I don't care what you say. I still love Charlie Sheen!! Nice inflection. It really worked. The unsung heroes desperately needed to be seen. As DFTBA says, "Let's make the world suck less!" Thank you for putting all that information out there for us to hear. One thing I would have improved on would be to have notecards instead of a huge piece of paper. This also helps with eye contact.
I liked the humor that you brought in with your examples of people. I also liked how you put in the family aspect and the misconception of heroes too. Great inflection in voice and speaking skills. I also liked your suicide stats. Great Job!!!
Everyday heroes are a great part of society that has been lost due to peer pressure and fitting in with society. These heroes can mean the difference between life and death in some situations, and so every person needs to live up to their potential to be a hero. Great topic and great way to bring out a very serious topic.
Your TED Talk really gave me inspiration to go out and change the world, and that it is possible to do so without super powers. The examples that you put in like the security guard gave me a better sense of perspective also. You also gave some great examples of how to be a hero, such as helping at a shelter, making a dinner, or even talking to someone about their problems.
Real life hero, suckaaa! Being a real life hero is now my goal, not everything you do has to be monumental to change the world. You weren't completely prepared considering it wasn't memorized, but, hey, you sounded really great! You made points that were completely relatable to my life and you spoke volumes!
Grace- I loved the pictures you used. Some were really funny and they were very relatable. You had really great points and your speech was inspiring. You sounded very professional and comfortable. I like how you related your topic to us too. Great job!
Great beginning question. I love the notion that heroes are among us. Heroes can do small and big things. I enjoyed the topic, but found the suicide, etc. issues a little random at first.Great last picture and statement!
Grace's presentation was great because of the humor she added into her presentation. Her slides went perfectly into her presentation. HEr voice was confident and inspiring.
Your presentation matches with your speech wonderfully and you use it to support it greatly. I like how you ask us questions to make a point and how you use a little bit a humor within the speech without getting out of control. Relating superheroes to regular people heroes is an interesting take on the situation because of the differences you bring up between them. It's awesome and inspiring!
What mattered in Grace's speech was being a hero in life not in media. She outlined her speech in an effective pattern and she deliverd it with a strong voice. She defineately integrated some humor but at some points the humor did not feal natural. All in all a great speech, my one beef is that she did reference her notes from time to time, but her referencing felt natural just like a normal speech.
Grace- Your topic was really good! I loved the way presented your talk, you seemed very confidant. It was fun to watch you and I could relate to your topic. You had a really good presentation great job!
Grace Very Professional, I love the power pants. I feel good about the people around me and myself. Everyone can be a hero. I know that suicide is a tough subject for everyone, and I'm glad that you brought that subject to light. Overall It was good.
The comparison between media heroes and real life heroes is a good one. I like how you relate this issue to Arapahoe, giving everybody something to relate to.
I thought you pwerpoint went really well with your speech. It was interesting and well thought out. I never really thought about the people around me as heros, but youe speech gave me a newoutlook. I liked how you use statistics and images to represent your points. Your conclusion was passionate and funny. Good Job!
Grace, you have a good message to present. People can be heroes to just normal people by being normal people. We can all help someone in some way and be a hero. I think that this idea is a very good idea that people don't make themselves heroes, but they need to. We all can help other people by listening. I really enjoyed listening to your speech.
Great presentation! All of your ideas made a lot of sense, and I liked how you countered the stereotype of heroism being a man in a cape with the fact that anyone can be a hero; very well prepared.
This presentation was really amazing. I never have given a lot of thought to the meaning of what a hero is. This presentation really mattered and I really enjoyed how you brought it out to the big picture. Overall, great job it was just amazing.
Grace- I liked how you showed the different sides of being a hero. I like how you included the U Matter campaign. It really shows that everyone matters in the world and everyone can be a hero.
Grace- Beautiful job! I really loved your topic and it inspired me and made me believe I can do something! We can all change the world and I'm really glad you talked about that. You also are very relaxed and confident when you talk, which really helps the audience agree wit you. Nicely done girl! (:
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ReplyDeleteGreat message, and very clear wording! I can tell that you have rehearsed this many times.
Great ideas, and good delivery!
Great job!
Your topic was really original and I liked that you talked about many different people, like family, friends, teachers, security guards, and that they are all just normal people, doing extraordinary things. You were very comfortable talking, and it was very easy to understand.
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ReplyDeleteI loved the way you presented your talk. You seemed confident and I loved the humor you put in. I wanted to watch every minute. You topic was also very fun and it was a great idea. It made it easier to watch because you seemed so comfortable. Great job!
GRACE! Are you a teacher? You looked so professional! You moved along very well, it was a smooth and fluid.
ReplyDeleteGrace, I don't care what you say. I still love Charlie Sheen!! Nice inflection. It really worked. The unsung heroes desperately needed to be seen. As DFTBA says, "Let's make the world suck less!" Thank you for putting all that information out there for us to hear. One thing I would have improved on would be to have notecards instead of a huge piece of paper. This also helps with eye contact.
ReplyDeleteI liked the humor that you brought in with your examples of people. I also liked how you put in the family aspect and the misconception of heroes too. Great inflection in voice and speaking skills. I also liked your suicide stats. Great Job!!!
ReplyDeleteEveryday heroes are a great part of society that has been lost due to peer pressure and fitting in with society. These heroes can mean the difference between life and death in some situations, and so every person needs to live up to their potential to be a hero. Great topic and great way to bring out a very serious topic.
ReplyDeleteYour TED Talk really gave me inspiration to go out and change the world, and that it is possible to do so without super powers. The examples that you put in like the security guard gave me a better sense of perspective also. You also gave some great examples of how to be a hero, such as helping at a shelter, making a dinner, or even talking to someone about their problems.
ReplyDeleteReal life hero, suckaaa! Being a real life hero is now my goal, not everything you do has to be monumental to change the world. You weren't completely prepared considering it wasn't memorized, but, hey, you sounded really great! You made points that were completely relatable to my life and you spoke volumes!
ReplyDeleteVery engaging and inspiring talk! It was very smooth and you conveyed your topic very well.
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ReplyDeleteI loved the pictures you used. Some were really funny and they were very relatable. You had really great points and your speech was inspiring. You sounded very professional and comfortable. I like how you related your topic to us too. Great job!
You had a really well put together presentation. You addressed a really important point that a lot of people can relate to. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat beginning question. I love the notion that heroes are among us. Heroes can do small and big things. I enjoyed the topic, but found the suicide, etc. issues a little random at first.Great last picture and statement!
ReplyDeleteGrace's presentation was great because of the humor she added into her presentation. Her slides went perfectly into her presentation. HEr voice was confident and inspiring.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation matches with your speech wonderfully and you use it to support it greatly. I like how you ask us questions to make a point and how you use a little bit a humor within the speech without getting out of control. Relating superheroes to regular people heroes is an interesting take on the situation because of the differences you bring up between them. It's awesome and inspiring!
ReplyDeleteWhat mattered in Grace's speech was being a hero in life not in media. She outlined her speech in an effective pattern and she deliverd it with a strong voice. She defineately integrated some humor but at some points the humor did not feal natural. All in all a great speech, my one beef is that she did reference her notes from time to time, but her referencing felt natural just like a normal speech.
ReplyDeleteGrace- Your topic was really good! I loved the way presented your talk, you seemed very confidant. It was fun to watch you and I could relate to your topic. You had a really good presentation great job!
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ReplyDeleteVery Professional, I love the power pants. I feel good about the people around me and myself. Everyone can be a hero. I know that suicide is a tough subject for everyone, and I'm glad that you brought that subject to light. Overall It was good.
The comparison between media heroes and real life heroes is a good one. I like how you relate this issue to Arapahoe, giving everybody something to relate to.
ReplyDeleteI thought you pwerpoint went really well with your speech. It was interesting and well thought out. I never really thought about the people around me as heros, but youe speech gave me a newoutlook. I liked how you use statistics and images to represent your points. Your conclusion was passionate and funny. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteGrace, you have a good message to present. People can be heroes to just normal people by being normal people. We can all help someone in some way and be a hero. I think that this idea is a very good idea that people don't make themselves heroes, but they need to. We all can help other people by listening. I really enjoyed listening to your speech.
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation! All of your ideas made a lot of sense, and I liked how you countered the stereotype of heroism being a man in a cape with the fact that anyone can be a hero; very well prepared.
ReplyDeleteGrace good message. I liked how you gave examples of the need for everyday hereos. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis presentation was really amazing. I never have given a lot of thought to the meaning of what a hero is. This presentation really mattered and I really enjoyed how you brought it out to the big picture. Overall, great job it was just amazing.
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you showed the different sides of being a hero. I like how you included the U Matter campaign. It really shows that everyone matters in the world and everyone can be a hero.
Grace- Beautiful job! I really loved your topic and it inspired me and made me believe I can do something! We can all change the world and I'm really glad you talked about that. You also are very relaxed and confident when you talk, which really helps the audience agree wit you. Nicely done girl! (:
ReplyDeleteGrace- Your presentation was great! You did such a good job explaining and elaborating on what you mean, and you had a nice speaking voice.
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